taking stock of your work

I believe I told my story well. students are able to relate to it
I told the story well. There are enough details
I could always improve on my conclusions
My idea for my narrative came from reading others out of field gudie to writing book. I wanted to show how I stuggled with writing. Unlike reading
I amke my rough draft very rough then add/fix my final copy a few times before its done
A graphic I could have used for my essay was an eagle for my high school or a lion for Penn State. or a pen since it delt with writing
Peer review helped to give me ideas and expand my paper
Next time I might do two rough drafts

number one

This book comes off as a bit depressing. She had a sad childhood and her adult life doesnt seem to be much better. her only friends are dead. but so far its an easy read.